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okay, here it is: one of the final chapters of my novel, a Story of Improbability. The skateboard contest, one highly improbable jump, many doubts, and... a date with Riley Watson!
I know I promised to end teh story, but the typing goes slower than expected, due to snowy weather, exams, christmas parties, well, you all know the crap that kepes one away from his computer... I hope you don't mind! I'm typing non-stop for the moment, and soon you'll get the rest!
I know I promised to end teh story, but the typing goes slower than expected, due to snowy weather, exams, christmas parties, well, you all know the crap that kepes one away from his computer... I hope you don't mind! I'm typing non-stop for the moment, and soon you'll get the rest!
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I loved it! 
But dang, Riley's one of the biggest asses I've ever seen 
(no pun intended 
) Now I'm really cheering for Richard 
I really can't wait for the next part 
There were quite a lot of spelling and grammatical errors in this chapter though. You really need someone to proofread it for you, cause it's pretty annoying
The story is great though 
If you want, I'll go through this chapter for you, and rephrase the whole thing a bit, I've nothing better to do ATM anyway XD
But dang, Riley's one of the biggest asses I've ever seen (no pun intended ) Now I'm really cheering for Richard I really can't wait for the next part There were quite a lot of spelling and grammatical errors in this chapter though. You really need someone to proofread it for you, cause it's pretty annoying
The story is great though If you want, I'll go through this chapter for you, and rephrase the whole thing a bit, I've nothing better to do ATM anyway XD